feedback on final draft

1) YES

2) YES

3) NO

4) POP?

5) YES

6) NO

7) YES

8) YES

9) YES

Above is the comments received on my final draft. overall i am pleased with what i got as feedback. however the things i failed on were basic mistakes which can be easily rectified 

1. I have submitted a front cover, contents page and double page spread, so i have met this criteria 
2. I have included 4 images - all use different camera shots
3. I have all of the essential conventions except  Date line
4. My music genre isn't as clear as i would like it to be. My teacher immediately said 'POP' yet put a ? next to it.
5. On my contents page I have a section called 'ON THE COVER' my teacher is unable to link what stories under there to the cover lines on my front cover. 
6. I currently have 40 pages in my magazine and not 38.
7. My double page spread numbers (14 and 15) correspond to what I have put on my contents page.
8. My point size is a suitable size. 
9. I have some syntax, grammar and/or spelling errors which need rectifying.
10. The image on my front cover currently does present a musical artist to teacher. The musical mise-en-scene is not coming across. / I need to add more features to my contents page - for example live reviews and subscription possibilities. / My teacher poses a very good question, which I need to think about. This involves looking at my article and editing accordingly.